AT Kurosaki-Sasori-chan

I'd have to say that this picture came out very attractive. I'm not going to call it perfect though because that's not quite fair.

Unless, of course it's be an intended pinup, I'd have to say the focus on her thighs and just almost shown butt is a little much.

The focus on the details is great, I will have to say that they came out fabulous! The only issue here is then there's not enough folds on the fabric, her dress would look more real at the bodice if the folds reacted to her breasts, like if they folded horizontally to make them seem bigger. Other then that you should try gathering the cloth at the top part of the sleeves to make it look like it has more poof and less just being a shaped sleeve.

The coloring and the shading on the other hand is fantastic. It's got that eye-capturing pinkness to it, giving it such a high rating on vision.

I like how her expression came out, it makes her look a bit like a playful flirt type.

As for her hair, it looks great, I like how deep the colors become. It's a good look.

Overall, well done!