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Comm Clarice by Furihime Comm Clarice by Furihime
Special RL commission for :iconj3fk4:, his OC, Clarice.

I got the flower lineart from pixiv, drawing that many flowers made my head dizzy :rofl:

I'm practicing BG now, hope you like it! :iconomgsocuteplz:

Character (c) ~j3fk4
Art by me~
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:iconveenaval:
I love the way you shaded this. God knows how long this took you, but the end result turned out fantastic. Everything fits perfectly into this drawing, it's almost as if you can feel the atmosphere in this drawing. The texture you used is also very fitting, and adds a nice effect. I could go on about how much I love looking at this piece, but I'm going to jump ahead to the critique.

By looking at this piece, I can also tell you need to do some work on your anatomy. First, the arms look. If you were to put your arms straight at your sides, you'll notice your elbow is sort of in line with your waist. In that sense, the upper arm seems to be too long, while the forearms are too short. Another thing that bugs me are the hands. They seem to have been drawn a bit messy. It would be a good idea if you looked for stock images on hands, or look at your own hands for reference. Lastly, the collarbone looks way off. If you look at pictures of anatomy, or your own body, you'll see that the collarbone goes from your upper shoulders, to the bottom of your neck. You drew it dropping too low onto the body. The collarbone is pretty much two straight bones that meet in the middle creating a gap, which resembles a semi circle.

I hope I was specific enough on my points, and hopefully I explained them in a way you could understand. Other than that, I love looking at your gallery, and I hope to see more work from you.
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Yurinachan Mar 16, 2014  New member Hobbyist Photographer
Wow!! Is she reading a love letter? x)
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:iconmomichi15:
momichi15 Feb 5, 2014  New member Student Artist
all your stuff are just so beautiful
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:iconkanadetachibana321:
:squee: super awesome !!
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:iconmarihikari:
so beautiful~~
lovely coloring too ^^
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:iconhinata-aron:
Hinata-Aron Aug 16, 2013  Student General Artist

Alright

You are my favorite artist You just draw such amazing pictures!

This one has to be my most favorite yet!

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:iconhinoki151:
<font><font class="">Si romantique et triste à la foie. A partir de cette réalisation on pourrai raconter une histoire. A vous de voir ...</font></font>
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:iconcassiuseos:
Cassiuseos Jul 28, 2013  Professional Traditional Artist
AAw so cute!
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:iconstardustnn:
it was a long time, since i visited your gallery O_O, and wow..you improved a lot *///*.
I love your coloration *///*, it looks so nice and beautifl ♥.
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:iconfurihime:
Furihime Aug 28, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I hope you will visit me again.. :icontearplz:
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:iconstardustnn:
I will :3 ♥
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