Comm Clarice

I love the way you shaded this. God knows how long this took you, but the end result turned out fantastic. Everything fits perfectly into this drawing, it's almost as if you can feel the atmosphere in this drawing. The texture you used is also very fitting, and adds a nice effect. I could go on about how much I love looking at this piece, but I'm going to jump ahead to the critique.

By looking at this piece, I can also tell you need to do some work on your anatomy. First, the arms look. If you were to put your arms straight at your sides, you'll notice your elbow is sort of in line with your waist. In that sense, the upper arm seems to be too long, while the forearms are too short. Another thing that bugs me are the hands. They seem to have been drawn a bit messy. It would be a good idea if you looked for stock images on hands, or look at your own hands for reference. Lastly, the collarbone looks way off. If you look at pictures of anatomy, or your own body, you'll see that the collarbone goes from your upper shoulders, to the bottom of your neck. You drew it dropping too low onto the body. The collarbone is pretty much two straight bones that meet in the middle creating a gap, which resembles a semi circle.

I hope I was specific enough on my points, and hopefully I explained them in a way you could understand. Other than that, I love looking at your gallery, and I hope to see more work from you.