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May 31, 2013
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Comm Eien No Ko by Furihime Comm Eien No Ko by Furihime
Sketch commission for :iconsmittenjunglekitten:, design based on his description :iconilavplz:
I hope she met your expectations~
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Critique by Rakukomori Aug 4, 2013, 12:40:15 PM
This piece look really nice~ The shading and shadows you applied looks very digital art-esque which really adds a beautiful touch to the artwork. Anatomy-wise, everything seems perfectly fine. The only thing I could really point out is the size of her shoulders is just too small.

Her hair on the other hand looks wonderful. I really enjoy the length, the way it drapes over her and the planet she's sitting upon. The dress she wears looks really nice however I believe it would have been nice to be more detailed? Perhaps it may not be the design of your commissioner, but I believe it would have been more eye-catching if she had more complex designs along her sleeves or more so on the obi~ Speaking of the obi, the flower design is really good but I would have liked to see more of it. Same goes with the matching hair piece.
Continuing on with her kimono, the ruffles could have been better? More fluff to them? (Poor choice of word but I hope you get the idea) And especially on the sleeves. However, the sleeves themselves look really amazing with their folds.

Now with the background, the sepia gradient fits very well. In my opinion, it would have looked really if the planets and moon had more shading and details to them. Not really much I could say about it. Originality-wise, I've seen this type of picture many times but that's only if you aiming to be original. It's a fantastic piece overall~ :3c
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MimiSushi Featured By Owner Feb 20, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
Wow... It gives off the image of a mysterious girl on some kind of rock or planet! Nice work!!!! XD
XxAnimeCharliexX Featured By Owner Dec 27, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I like the way her hair 'flows'!! It's beautiful!! ;D
CaramelSagwa Featured By Owner Dec 3, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
Oh so pretty!
LailahEnvisage Featured By Owner Jul 27, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Another incredibly amazing piece of work! Awesome!!!
Golddustfairy Featured By Owner Jul 25, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
love it:)
Garibaldina Featured By Owner Jul 23, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
That's beautiful... *w*

10008320M Featured By Owner Jul 18, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
This piece gives the feeling that she's been searching for someone/something for a very long time and is just on the verge of finding it at last. Almost as if the stars are guiding her along the way.
Babou-Shka Featured By Owner Jul 18, 2013
sorry there's a mistake, didn't want to put the link. You can delete/hide my comment.
Dreanora Featured By Owner Jul 9, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
So pretty! c:
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