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Comm Joseybird by Furihime Comm Joseybird by Furihime
Thanks :iconjoseybird:!!
Hope you like it! It has been a long time since I draw a detailed moe girl, took a really long time, but it's fun~ Onto next commission ^^
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I love the color scheme, though I still wish you'd choose a darker palette once in a while. I only have one complaint however, her lower leg. It's about a half head too long. Folded under her like that, the foot would be in the same location as her posterior. The easiest fix would be to shift the anklet flower up to just a little after the end of the calf, and you'd have it. The foot itself is still a bit over rotated, but a good adjustment for the posture. Outside of that, every thing looks good to me. Great work as usual.
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you art is really good, but you might wanna watch your anatomy, that leg is really long, but other than that its good i like your choice in colors and the concept is really nice, not to mention the background is really nice. it might help to add some more "rose red" around near her head because the roses is a brighter color than most of the picture and red usually draws peoples eyes to begin with, so it sorta comes across like the rose is your focus point, unless that was your idea in which case, good job :) . hope this helps ya ~DWF
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lamby-luv Featured By Owner Mar 28, 2014
Ohmygosh I love the dress!!
You seriously never disappoint me!
Bejowish Featured By Owner Mar 13, 2014  Hobbyist
mbak feiii gambarnya udah bagusss :D tp aye merasaada yg janggal ama kakinya... kayaknya kepanjangan... menurutku sihh :D tp klo pewarnaan udah keren pake banget kok
otter1408 Featured By Owner Mar 11, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Ah! Very cool!
OtakuNekoSan Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2014  Student Artist
Wonderful work >w<
cokeboy Featured By Owner Mar 9, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
You did a great work on her dress~ :D
czmAvery Featured By Owner Mar 9, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
HO. LY. COW. Like, is there anything more I can say? I wish I could speak feeling and you could tell how AMAZING THIS FLIPPING IS OMG I JUST CAN'T.
marikadaa Featured By Owner Mar 8, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
So amazing, i love the dress! <3
Furihime Featured By Owner Mar 9, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you dear ^^
fullerjames Featured By Owner Mar 8, 2014
very nice
Furihime Featured By Owner Mar 9, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
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