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Comm - Kane Sarius

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Thank you for commissioning me :iconsoronadragon:!
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:star::star::star::star::star-half: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star: Vision
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Originality
:star::star::star::star::star: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Impact

Alrighty! Decided to critique another one of your arts~
To start this off, I would like to say what I like about this drawing. I really love how you did the hair, it's so detailed! Same things goes with the eyes, too <3 I like how you did the folds of the clothes// I kind of envy you on the way you do clothes <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/h/h…" width="15" height="13" alt=":heart:" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="357" title="Heart"/>

But, putting that aside, here are the pros and cons:

Pros:
• The anatomy is good! Nothing is out of proportion, by the looks of it.
• As I've already pointed out, the hair and the rest of the drawing is detailed. I love how you shaded it also! <3333
•The vision, originality, technique, and impact are good! (I gave you 4.5 and 5 stars on those because of it.)

Cons:
• Just by looking at this, I don't see anything wrong with the drawing.


Sorry if I was rude at all on this critique. But again, you did an awesome job, as always! I'm sure *SoronaDragon will love this! <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b…" width="15" height="15" alt=":D" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="366" title=":D (Big Grin)"/>