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August 4, 2013
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Comm Kateri and Njlon copy by Furihime Comm Kateri and Njlon copy by Furihime
Commission for :iconlacindra: Her OCs Kateri and Njlon. They are sisters.

Hope you like it :iconhappyblueplz:
Art by me~
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I've never written a critique before, but I thought I'd try it out so here it goes! I really like your style and you're very good at coloring. If I had to point out anything that needs improvement with this picture I'd say the shorter girl's position is a little awkward, in particular her arms which almost seem to be swallowed unnaturally in the taller girl's arm. Other than that, the art is fantastic and I love it!! I am just saying what I see not that I could do it better, but your work is really impressive to me. I think you should keep doing what you do!!!<3
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Good job as far as coloring. I really enjoy the watercolor effect you seem to have (seeing as you marked this as digital). However there are some positioning elements such as the arms of the shorter one, the breasts of the taller female don't seem to take much affect from the arms of the shorter girl. Also the legs of the shorter girl look a bit unnatural, I know you were probably meaning to have the gap in the legs, but from this angle, there wouldn't be any gap... or if there was, the inner leg would be much thicker than it is currently. It would still be smaller than the outer leg, but it wouldn't be as small. Anyway.. I don't mean to tear apart your work. (one thing I've learned is to take my work to a mirror, or take a photo of it and flip it. If you notice imperfections in the reversed image, it helps you be able to pinpoint and correct so both views of the image look the same.

Other than that its pretty sweet. love it lots!! <3
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AquaFutago Aug 11, 2013  Student Digital Artist
reminds me of me & my twin. <3
kawaii =>.<=
Kirika88 Aug 5, 2013  Hobbyist
KampfzwergLevi Aug 5, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
so cute <3
nice coloring <3
mightypie9001 Aug 4, 2013  Student Filmographer
looks cool :P
princessharuhi Aug 4, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Thus is so cute! I love the color and the pose in this! This is a wonderful piece! :iconmoeblushplz:
it's amazing!!!!!!!!!!!!! i absolutely love this!!!!!!!!!!!! i really can't think of anything to criticise you on........... it's too awesome.
NazoChronicles9000 Aug 4, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Nice job.
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