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November 10, 2013
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Comm -  Saraawayuki by Furihime Comm -  Saraawayuki by Furihime
Thank you for commissioning me, :iconsaraawayuki:! She is a very cute OC! :iconrubcheeksplz: Hope you like it, dear!
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I think this a really good pice of art.
At first because the character is really cute, in your style she is even more!
The way you color is really unique, I never saw someone who made the shaddows like this. Because o that her clothes looks more 3D, I think.
The calm colors make it easy to look at it and also a pleasure to look at it. I think it calms yourself while watching down.
However, there is one thing I have to say isn´t that good in this drawing. I think you could have drawn her in another, more dynamic pose. Here she is just standing. But that doesn´t mean it´s bad :3
So in the end I can say this is a really awesome, no, stunning picture with a lof of details.

I say, really great work, thanks for making my eyes smile, hahaha :'3
have a nice day, Ioko~
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I like how this character stands out more from her background, but I think you could lighten and desaturate it just a little so she stands out more. Her pose and anatomy are quite nice though like someone else had stated it could be a tad more dynamic.

For her dress, I think you could add just a little blue to it, as it looks almost pure black. I don't know if you used lighter and darker versions of the base colour for the highlights and shadows, but it does have that effect somewhat. Her hair, from a distance, looks like you just used plain gray to shade it, but it does have a more French gray look to it so it does look pretty nice. One thing I do have to say about the way you coloured her dress and all the laces - they do make the blue ribbons and rose stand out very well.

I also like the little coloured specks and dots on her dress, as they give it some personality.

Her facial expression could use a little work, but I like their eyes as they match her ribbons, and the limited pallet works so well with this picture.

Very pretty picture, and the background isn't quite as overpowering as it is in some of your pictures. Sometimes, less is more.
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yumeriku Featured By Owner Feb 10, 2014
wow i wish i had an outfit like that so cute!
Viktorya2011 Featured By Owner Dec 18, 2013
Gorgeous! :love:
ADoseOfInsanity Featured By Owner Dec 8, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Too cute!! <3
MintyAngel0508 Featured By Owner Dec 5, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
kazimer Featured By Owner Nov 28, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Marina-artt Featured By Owner Nov 15, 2013
oh... I would like you to teach me how to do this kinda things on the computer, cause I'm delighted
Chocibunny Featured By Owner Nov 15, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
it's so fluffy
ryiss Featured By Owner Nov 14, 2013  Student Digital Artist
Lovely ; u ;
vampiresongka Featured By Owner Nov 13, 2013  Student Artist
she's so cute!! :D
On2XSecretProbation Featured By Owner Nov 12, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Very cute! I love the work put into the hair and clothes. The way the black is colored really brings out the blue.
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