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Thank you for commissioning me, :iconsaraawayuki:! She is a very cute OC! :iconrubcheeksplz: Hope you like it, dear!
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Critique by IokoThePanda Nov 10, 2013, 11:11:46 AM
I think this a really good pice of art.
At first because the character is really cute, in your style she is even more!
The way you color is really unique, I never saw someone who made the shaddows like this. Because o that her clothes looks more 3D, I think.
The calm colors make it easy to look at it and also a pleasure to look at it. I think it calms yourself while watching down.
However, there is one thing I have to say isn´t that good in this drawing. I think you could have drawn her in another, more dynamic pose. Here she is just standing. But that doesn´t mean it´s bad :3
So in the end I can say this is a really awesome, no, stunning picture with a lof of details.

I say, really great work, thanks for making my eyes smile, hahaha :'3
have a nice day, Ioko~
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I like how this character stands out more from her background, but I think you could lighten and desaturate it just a little so she stands out more. Her pose and anatomy are quite nice though like someone else had stated it could be a tad more dynamic.

For her dress, I think you could add just a little blue to it, as it looks almost pure black. I don't know if you used lighter and darker versions of the base colour for the highlights and shadows, but it does have that effect somewhat. Her hair, from a distance, looks like you just used plain gray to shade it, but it does have a more French gray look to it so it does look pretty nice. One thing I do have to say about the way you coloured her dress and all the laces - they do make the blue ribbons and rose stand out very well.

I also like the little coloured specks and dots on her dress, as they give it some personality.

Her facial expression could use a little work, but I like their eyes as they match her ribbons, and the limited pallet works so well with this picture.

Very pretty picture, and the background isn't quite as overpowering as it is in some of your pictures. Sometimes, less is more.
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yumeriku Featured By Owner Feb 10, 2014
wow i wish i had an outfit like that so cute!
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Viktorya2011 Featured By Owner Dec 18, 2013
Gorgeous! :love:
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:iconadoseofinsanity:
ADoseOfInsanity Featured By Owner Dec 8, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Too cute!! <3
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MintyAngel0508 Featured By Owner Dec 5, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
OMG SHE IS SO KAWAII AND PRETTY~! :D
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:iconkazimer:
kazimer Featured By Owner Nov 28, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
KNEEL BEFORE ZOD.
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Marina-artt Featured By Owner Nov 15, 2013
oh... I would like you to teach me how to do this kinda things on the computer, cause I'm delighted
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:iconchocibunny:
Chocibunny Featured By Owner Nov 15, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
it's so fluffy
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:iconryiss:
ryiss Featured By Owner Nov 14, 2013  Student Digital Artist
Lovely ; u ;
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vampiresongka Featured By Owner Nov 13, 2013  Student Artist
she's so cute!! :D
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On2XSecretProbation Featured By Owner Nov 12, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Very cute! I love the work put into the hair and clothes. The way the black is colored really brings out the blue.
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Josh-the-Cyborg-Cat Featured By Owner Nov 12, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
really cute
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HectorMcreyes Featured By Owner Nov 12, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Great
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:iconmoekimiko:
MoeKimiko Featured By Owner Nov 12, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
Soo pretty~!! I love her hair and the background is soo cool~!
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:iconkanami-sempai3060:
Kanami-Sempai3060 Featured By Owner Nov 12, 2013  Hobbyist
Cute ^^
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:iconmelananime:
MelanAnime Featured By Owner Nov 12, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
awesome!
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:iconui-azuma:
Ui-Azuma Featured By Owner Nov 12, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
This!

So beautiful. :love:
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:iconxandamus:
Xandamus Featured By Owner Nov 11, 2013   General Artist
I like her...so goth sheek
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:iconnoiu:
Noiu Featured By Owner Nov 11, 2013  Student General Artist
very beutiful :3
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:iconmoeumeko:
MoeUmeko Featured By Owner Nov 11, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
The hair and the details are gorgeous. Such a nice color palette you used. I feel like she is bring in the winter feelings.
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IcedLemons Featured By Owner Nov 11, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
sooo pretty! love her hair flow!
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RestlessFlower Featured By Owner Nov 11, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Soo beautiful!
I totally love the dress and the shading is very good!
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:iconc-karis:
C-Karis Featured By Owner Nov 11, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Just amazing! I love it!!!
So cool and just such a passion <3
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CielYamoguchi105 Featured By Owner Nov 11, 2013  Student Artist
Love thiss, she is sooooooo darn cute mon ^^Love :happybounce: :happybounce: 
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TakahashiYukiko Featured By Owner Nov 11, 2013  Student Digital Artist
nyaaa kawaii X3 :iconrubcheeksplz:
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funvampiremihihou Featured By Owner Nov 11, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Oh wow, she looks gorgeous~!
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lamby-luv Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2013
Lovely as always~
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Meiryuki Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2013
Whoa look at all that hair///
I really love how the character really goes together with the background! It looks really professional
And the hair is amazing unf how do you have the patience to draw so much hair?
Lovely artwork!
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Acelyan Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2013  Student General Artist
This is so pretty"! There is such a great flow in it! Great job!
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darkmadbunny Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist

;A;

why can't I draw like this????? :(

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SieghartXx Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
*A*
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savasrule Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
prettyLove 
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SaraAwayuki Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
 I absolutely adore it!!!!! It's so beautiful and you have portrayed her well... Her hair is beautiful :heart: thank you so much 
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Saki-chan99 Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
awesome!
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Qaida Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2013
She's so adorable! I love the colors you used! She looks amazing :D
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DeadCobra Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2013
Beautiful :lovelyeyes:
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:iconhonounokage:
HonouNoKage Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Wa-Loli :3 ~=w=~
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RonnyTheDisaster Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2013  Hobbyist
what a gorgeous way to color ; A ;; just wooow<3 your style is beautiful<3
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:iconmelananime:
MelanAnime Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
awesome work!!!
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:iconnamyupii:
Namyupii Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2013
wahh this is so perff <3
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:iconpersephonekat:
PersephoneKat Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2013  Student
How lovely!
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alessandra2000 Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
So beautiful!!!:clap:
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marikadaa Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
wow, awesome, i love her hair and dress! *O*
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NekkoriAdopts Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
this is really amazing <3 her hair looks so nice, and the overall coloring is really pretty ^^
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loveedreams Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
amazinggg!!
ohh her hairr :heart: :heart:
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:iconendiria:
Endiria Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2013  Student Digital Artist
Amg, it looks really amazing! C: I love your coloring.
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SirMimsyPompingdon Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2013
SUGOI! ><
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