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Commission for :iconkurama-chan: Thank you for commissioning me :iconhappyblueplz: And I hope you like it dear :iconrubcheeksplz:
Even though making BG is hard, I'm really enjoying it :icongawwplz:

Tomoyuki belongs to *Kurama-chan and Elliot belongs to *Yukiko-Kun

I'm sorry I'll be late in replying, RL sucks :iconpapcryplz:
Updated because I forgot Tomoyuki's mole, orz, I'm sorry :iconlazycryplz:
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:icontheskull31:
This looks very intriguing and well thought-out. Now, to explain why, let's get down to it!

Vision: Everything about this picture of art conveys emotion and mood. Excellent choice of color, excellent outlining. Four and-a-half stars.
Originality: Since this was a commission you did for someone, I won't judge too high or too low in this category, but I will give my honest opinion: You made the commissioner very proud. Four stars.
Technique: In all likelihood, the one thing that makes a drawing good is the effort, and you put forth a lot of it. Four stars.
Impact: Critics such as myself will see a lot of worth in this. Four stars.

To conclude my critique, I'll say that you've done a great job doing this, and as long as you can maintain the current level of quality, you'll find your place in the art world.





Critiqued by Kevin 'The Skull' Anderson

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Tart-a-Tea Featured By Owner Jul 12, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
lemme fav this Hamtaro Mouse Emoji-03 (Squee) [V1] 
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:iconakyomi:
Akyomi Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
WAAAAAAH ! GOSH THEY LOOK BEAUTIFUL ! Llama Emoji-10 (Shy) [V1]  la in love  Tards in love  Llama Emoji-38 (Confused) [V2]  I am Love..Onion 
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:iconqaida:
Qaida Featured By Owner Oct 30, 2013
I love the expressions on each of them. They're both super hot hahaha XD *shot* Beautiful as always!! 
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:iconstrawberryjami:
StrawberryJami Featured By Owner Oct 29, 2013  Student Filmographer
woooow! amazing :DDDD
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:iconpincks:
Pincks Featured By Owner Oct 17, 2013
on fire!!

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:iconchuiyi:
chuiyi Featured By Owner Oct 6, 2013
ASDFGDGSD BL!!!!
Daaawww!! It's such a cute scene :heart:

Let me have your bg skills~
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:iconfurihime:
Furihime Featured By Owner Oct 20, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
BL, after a long time :iconteheeyesplz:

My BG is suck, baby, you shouldn't have :iconlazycryplz:
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suley-star Featured By Owner Sep 22, 2013
OMG sooooooooooooooooooooo beautiful!!!!!
amazing!!! :O i love ittttttttttttttt *dies* :iconlazycryplz:
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:iconmichhung:
MichHung Featured By Owner Sep 21, 2013
so cute
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:icongurincchi:
Gurincchi Featured By Owner Sep 17, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
suka banget :iconlazycryplz:
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:iconmadara1222:
Madara1222 Featured By Owner Sep 16, 2013
wow thats amazing =)
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:iconnyumetzu:
Nyumetzu Featured By Owner Sep 16, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Amazing! gah... why can't I do anything like this? ah well...
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:icongreensalamander:
greensalamander Featured By Owner Sep 16, 2013  Hobbyist
lovely :)
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:iconramwoc87:
RAMWOC87 Featured By Owner Sep 15, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Amazing job! The colors are beautiful!
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yunomisaki Featured By Owner Sep 15, 2013
wow my gosh thats amazing 0.0 it's so good i wish i could do stuff like this!
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:iconhardtospot:
HardToSpot Featured By Owner Sep 15, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Very nice :D
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YukinaHimewara Featured By Owner Sep 15, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Sooooo Nice Bulbasaur Wnat 
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SirMimsyPompingdon Featured By Owner Sep 15, 2013
The eyes are always so beautiful^^
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:iconmiyaashiin:
miyAasHiin Featured By Owner Sep 14, 2013
Uuuuuh~ Warnanyaaaa~~~~ :iconfinallyplz:
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:iconfurihime:
Furihime Featured By Owner Sep 16, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Ada apa dengan warna miyaa? :iconheplz:
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:iconmiyaashiin:
miyAasHiin Featured By Owner Sep 17, 2013
Cantiiiiiik~~~~~
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HectorMcreyes Featured By Owner Sep 14, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Grandiós treball.
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:iconlunallachi:
lunallachi Featured By Owner Sep 14, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
GAMBARNYA KEREN SEKALEEEHH KAKAKKKKKK.... :iconsobbplz:
AJARIN /desh
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:iconfurihime:
Furihime Featured By Owner Sep 16, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Sudah kubilang aku g puas sama yg ini :icontearplz:
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:iconlamby-luv:
lamby-luv Featured By Owner Sep 14, 2013
:iconifaintplz: so... so beautiful!
they are both so cute!!! :iconmahfeelzplz:
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:iconsoarinsoraya:
SoarinSoraya Featured By Owner Sep 14, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Amazing! The coloring, lines, details, expressions... okay, everything, is lovely and so filled with life it makes me smile while my heart gives a little pang. *Smiles and bows*
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sreysat2013 Featured By Owner Sep 14, 2013  Hobbyist
:iconmonkeyloveplz:
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:iconmikausami:
MikaUsami Featured By Owner Sep 14, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Super!!!!!!!!!!!! :iconhontoplz:
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kittykatmiku12345 Featured By Owner Sep 14, 2013
hey furihime can you please show me how to draw a little like you im having a hard time drawing anime on the pc but on paper I can draw anime please help me lil neko mello Animated Love Monkey Skullcandy 8D :teamvictory: Emote Cuddle Love Spin emote :flame: Foxy Love Clefairy :tinywave: 
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kittykatmiku12345 Featured By Owner Sep 14, 2013
 this is super great artwork
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mewasaur Featured By Owner Sep 14, 2013
reeeeeeaaaaaalllly goooooooood~
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:icontanegg:
TanEgg Featured By Owner Sep 14, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
Ah yes this is one of the best pictures!
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WhiteHeartFlame Featured By Owner Sep 14, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
This is amazing.  I really like the colors in it!  :D
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:iconkurama-chan:
Kurama-chan Featured By Owner Sep 14, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I really love how you color, it's so wonderful! :heart:
Actually Tomoyuki is very expressive in many moments, he is just shy XD
And Elliot has a so sweet face!
Loved how you did the background too!

Thanks a lot! :hug:
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:iconfurihime:
Furihime Featured By Owner Sep 16, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanks for commissioning me, kurama-chan :iconrubcheeksplz:

Ahh, sorry, the description said he had a hard time express himself, so I thought... :iconorzplz:

Thanks a lot :heart:
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:iconkurama-chan:
Kurama-chan Featured By Owner Sep 17, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
No, no, it's quite the contrary, he can get so intense when he fights for something that he wants that he can be seen as an aggressive person, when he is actually kinda sweet XD Sorry, I meant that he has a hard time expressing himself the right way ;__;
I think the scenario you drew is quite great for a serious scene (like a fight with his mom, getting consoled by Elliot :heart:)
But the final result is wonderful, it's great! :hug:
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MiftahulKrm Featured By Owner Sep 14, 2013  Student Digital Artist
This is beautiful :iconiloveyouplz:
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Archon3-5 Featured By Owner Sep 14, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Great Work Right there :) Keep it up ^ ^
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Kenshin--Kenshin Featured By Owner Sep 14, 2013
beautiful <3
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:iconmarikadaa:
marikadaa Featured By Owner Sep 14, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
cool!
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Ui-Azuma Featured By Owner Sep 14, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Sooooooo cute. :D
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JigokuShii Featured By Owner Sep 14, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
omg this looks amazing! it looks absolutely detailed and pretty!
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Kitsu-Yuzurin Featured By Owner Sep 14, 2013  Hobbyist
Kyaa! Aku paling suka pair yaoi macam ini :iconiloveyouplz: expresionless uke :iconpervheplz:
BG-nya makin bagus aja nih >w<
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:iconfurihime:
Furihime Featured By Owner Sep 16, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Makasih banyaaaak :iconheplz: BGnya aneh itu.. :iconrlyplz:
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:iconkitsu-yuzurin:
Kitsu-Yuzurin Featured By Owner Sep 18, 2013  Hobbyist
Sama-sama~ ^w^ Daripada aku, kak.. :iconrlytearplz:
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Mizalee Featured By Owner Sep 14, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Amazing as always ^_^
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