This looks very intriguing and well thought-out. Now, to explain why, let's get down to it!
Vision: Everything about this picture of art conveys emotion and mood. Excellent choice of color, excellent outlining. Four and-a-half stars. Originality: Since this was a commission you did for someone, I won't judge too high or too low in this category, but I will give my honest opinion: You made the commissioner very proud. Four stars. Technique: In all likelihood, the one thing that makes a drawing good is the effort, and you put forth a lot of it. Four stars. Impact: Critics such as myself will see a lot of worth in this. Four stars.
To conclude my critique, I'll say that you've done a great job doing this, and as long as you can maintain the current level of quality, you'll find your place in the art world.
No, no, it's quite the contrary, he can get so intense when he fights for something that he wants that he can be seen as an aggressive person, when he is actually kinda sweet XD Sorry, I meant that he has a hard time expressing himself the right way ;__; I think the scenario you drew is quite great for a serious scene (like a fight with his mom, getting consoled by Elliot ) But the final result is wonderful, it's great!