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Commission for :iconkurama-chan: Thank you for commissioning me :iconhappyblueplz: And I hope you like it dear :iconrubcheeksplz:
Even though making BG is hard, I'm really enjoying it :icongawwplz:

Tomoyuki belongs to *Kurama-chan and Elliot belongs to *Yukiko-Kun

I'm sorry I'll be late in replying, RL sucks :iconpapcryplz:
Updated because I forgot Tomoyuki's mole, orz, I'm sorry :iconlazycryplz:
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:star::star::star::star: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Vision
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Impact

This looks very intriguing and well thought-out. Now, to explain why, let's get down to it!

Vision: Everything about this picture of art conveys emotion and mood. Excellent choice of color, excellent outlining. Four and-a-half stars.
Originality: Since this was a commission you did for someone, I won't judge too high or too low in this category, but I will give my honest opinion: You made the commissioner very proud. Four stars.
Technique: In all likelihood, the one thing that makes a drawing good is the effort, and you put forth a lot of it. Four stars.
Impact: Critics such as myself will see a lot of worth in this. Four stars.

To conclude my critique, I'll say that you've done a great job doing this, and as long as you can maintain the current level of quality, you'll find your place in the art world.





Critiqued by Kevin 'The Skull' Anderson

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