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I haven't been active in %FISSARE at all since I joined! :icontearplz: Please RP with me!!

Based on *linfang25 fiction about Rey and Aeri, it's too bad she has no plan on uploading it although the story is very nice :iconlazycryplz:

It's christmas! Share a christmas kiss!! Merry christmas all!!!!! Sorry it's just a sketch, so busy lately! Will upload christmas commission later~ :iconsitinthecornerplz:

Rey and Aeri (c) :iconlinfang25::iconfurihime:
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:iconchronochu-chan:
I really love how you set the mood, the climx of a kissing scene >w< I love this!!, the intense shading and the future-like theme always gets me excited!! So this would be in my favorites.
okay the art.. The way you made the girl cry as if she was crying over something she thought he did, so to make her happy and to show he loves her, a surprising kiss? Or either she's embarrassed by his love for her o3o I'm not a love expert, but this makes me want to read a shojo, even though I prefer Shonen.
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1. Great styling till I don't know what to say more of your photo...

2. The guy should be grabbing her head rather than holding her cheek. But both of them are necessary...

In my opinion, I'd rather like both of them to kiss in a happy way rather than a sad way... Itf it's sad, it looks like they will be abandoning each other...

3. The price tag tattoo on his arm can be improved by perfecting the numbers to look like a well-printed numbers on it...

4.. Oh yeah... You should adjust a bit of his eyes... Even better if his eyes are 80% closed. This might add an even more dramatic experience
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ChibiFox-Artist Featured By Owner Dec 9, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
So kawaii!!! Junko Enoshima (Kawaii Blush) [V5] 
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ebifuu Featured By Owner Jan 3, 2014
d-dat shading---- :iconhhhhplz: 
dewi berikanlah sebagian keahlianmu padakuh ~ :iconthegloryofplz: //slap
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Furihime Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Shading saya berantakan bangeeeeet saaaaay :iconimseriousplz:
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ebifuu Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2014
itu --- tidak benar --- mata kakak rabun kali //hus :iconimseriousplz:
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RollingTomorrow Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2014   General Artist
Wow, this is so romantic! ;w; It has such a serious mood, it looks so sincere or even desperate. Really beautiful work! :heart:
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:iconfurihime:
Furihime Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you deaaar! <3
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CrazyWave23HD Featured By Owner Dec 30, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
This looks Amazing!
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MiraLaViz Featured By Owner Dec 30, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
So Sweet <3
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SoronaDragon Featured By Owner Dec 29, 2013  Student Digital Artist
Oh How cute. and lovesly

I have feelz XD
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himesama13 Featured By Owner Dec 29, 2013
That is just so awesome!
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Nazue Featured By Owner Dec 29, 2013  Hobbyist
//raises hand
d-do you want to rp with my little enna-chan?
//asks shamelessly then hides

their hair shading and their are expressions are gorgerous~~
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Furihime Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Let's RP but how to start?? O w O
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Nazue Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2014  Hobbyist
why not RPing via skype or notes?
what do you like best?^^
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MohamedStudio Featured By Owner Dec 27, 2013
love it
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:iconfurihime:
Furihime Featured By Owner Dec 28, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you
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zully-chan Featured By Owner Dec 26, 2013
i love the faces <3<3<3<3<3<3
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Furihime Featured By Owner Dec 28, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you > w <
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ChemicalPunk2 Featured By Owner Dec 26, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Love it Love 
It's a Very good sketch :)

btw: linfang25 really should upload the fiction, I know I would definitely read it Thumbs Up  
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Furihime Featured By Owner Dec 28, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you, yeah, right! She should upload it :icontearplz:
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Li33i Featured By Owner Dec 25, 2013  Student General Artist
I love his eye! So perf X3 Did you do this with colored pencils? The effect is amazing! Merry Christmas :D
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Furihime Featured By Owner Dec 28, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you dear, and merry christmas!
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Li33i Featured By Owner Dec 30, 2013  Student General Artist
yep XD
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lamby-luv Featured By Owner Dec 25, 2013
*They're
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lamby-luv Featured By Owner Dec 25, 2013
There so cute!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Furihime Featured By Owner Dec 28, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you lamby-chan >w<
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BloodyPink-M Featured By Owner Dec 25, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww
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Furihime Featured By Owner Dec 28, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
( ˙▿˙)
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Mikoy-chan Featured By Owner Dec 25, 2013
So beautiful! TwT
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Furihime Featured By Owner Dec 28, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you :'D
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C-Karis Featured By Owner Dec 25, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
That is so cute <3 This one deserves a favourite ;)
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Furihime Featured By Owner Dec 28, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you dear :icontearplz:
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Cherrycane Featured By Owner Dec 25, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
oh my ..... :please: 
this is so Beautiful 

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Furihime Featured By Owner Dec 28, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you!!
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DanielsIndustry Featured By Owner Dec 24, 2013  Student General Artist
Lovely :3
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Furihime Featured By Owner Dec 28, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you ( ˙▿˙)
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xEskimoKissesx Featured By Owner Dec 24, 2013  Hobbyist
OMG! I love it soooooo much ;;

Are ur commish open?!?!?!
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Furihime Featured By Owner Dec 28, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you, and currently no, dear, sorryy :icontearplz:
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1PokemonPrincess Featured By Owner Dec 24, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Man,as much as I love this,the guy's eyes ruin it for me~
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Furihime Featured By Owner Dec 28, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
:icontearplz:
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MiuKnuffArts Featured By Owner Dec 24, 2013  Hobbyist
awww so beautiful Llama Emoji-09 (Drinking Tea) [V1] 
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Furihime Featured By Owner Dec 28, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you :iconlaplz:
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DeadCobra Featured By Owner Dec 24, 2013
Great
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Furihime Featured By Owner Dec 28, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you
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MininaKawaii6 Featured By Owner Dec 24, 2013  Student
soo sweet is beautiful I love it c:
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Furihime Featured By Owner Dec 28, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you ( *`▽´*)
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HosekiNeko Featured By Owner Dec 24, 2013
THIS IS SO CUTE!!! :iconmelt-plz:
I'm dying of cutness right now 
I want my first kiss like that >\\< I'm weird /).(\
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Furihime Featured By Owner Dec 28, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you, and this is their first kiss :iconxd--plz:
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HosekiNeko Featured By Owner Dec 28, 2013
hah no problem ^^ and aww that makes it even more cute >v<
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leanaboo Featured By Owner Dec 24, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
Its so cute TT^TT I can't put it in words TT^TT Its fricken adorable :3 I love it :)
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Furihime Featured By Owner Dec 28, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you so muuuch!
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