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FSR - Kiss by Furihime FSR - Kiss by Furihime
I haven't been active in %FISSARE at all since I joined! :icontearplz: Please RP with me!!

Based on *linfang25 fiction about Rey and Aeri, it's too bad she has no plan on uploading it although the story is very nice :iconlazycryplz:

It's christmas! Share a christmas kiss!! Merry christmas all!!!!! Sorry it's just a sketch, so busy lately! Will upload christmas commission later~ :iconsitinthecornerplz:

Rey and Aeri (c) :iconlinfang25::iconfurihime:
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I really love how you set the mood, the climx of a kissing scene >w< I love this!!, the intense shading and the future-like theme always gets me excited!! So this would be in my favorites.
okay the art.. The way you made the girl cry as if she was crying over something she thought he did, so to make her happy and to show he loves her, a surprising kiss? Or either she's embarrassed by his love for her o3o I'm not a love expert, but this makes me want to read a shojo, even though I prefer Shonen.
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1. Great styling till I don't know what to say more of your photo...

2. The guy should be grabbing her head rather than holding her cheek. But both of them are necessary...

In my opinion, I'd rather like both of them to kiss in a happy way rather than a sad way... Itf it's sad, it looks like they will be abandoning each other...

3. The price tag tattoo on his arm can be improved by perfecting the numbers to look like a well-printed numbers on it...

4.. Oh yeah... You should adjust a bit of his eyes... Even better if his eyes are 80% closed. This might add an even more dramatic experience
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ebifuu Featured By Owner Jan 3, 2014  Student
d-dat shading---- :iconhhhhplz: 
dewi berikanlah sebagian keahlianmu padakuh ~ :iconthegloryofplz: //slap
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Furihime Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Shading saya berantakan bangeeeeet saaaaay :iconimseriousplz:
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ebifuu Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2014  Student
itu --- tidak benar --- mata kakak rabun kali //hus :iconimseriousplz:
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RollingTomorrow Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2014   General Artist
Wow, this is so romantic! ;w; It has such a serious mood, it looks so sincere or even desperate. Really beautiful work! :heart:
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Furihime Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you deaaar! <3
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CrazyWave23HD Featured By Owner Dec 30, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
This looks Amazing!
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MiraLaViz Featured By Owner Dec 30, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
So Sweet <3
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SoronaDragon Featured By Owner Dec 29, 2013  Student Digital Artist
Oh How cute. and lovesly

I have feelz XD
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himesama13 Featured By Owner Dec 29, 2013
That is just so awesome!
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Nazue Featured By Owner Dec 29, 2013  Hobbyist
//raises hand
d-do you want to rp with my little enna-chan?
//asks shamelessly then hides

their hair shading and their are expressions are gorgerous~~
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