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HMLS - Poisoned Chocolate by Furihime HMLS - Poisoned Chocolate by Furihime
Valentine's event for :iconhmls:

In France, man is the one who gives presents for a woman on Valentine's day, that's why Fras is giving Ciel~ why? Because he's manly :iconheplz:

Fras wanted a baby, that's why he treated mini Ciel like his own kid. He was just caught up in the moment :iconrelievedplz:

Cielo Seymour Leoscuro and Fraser Archibalt belong to :iconlinfang25::iconfurihime: respectively~
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The dialogues are simple but they work for their purposes and make a good and funny story.The colors and the drawing style work together rather well and also they work nicely with the colors of the background.

The changes in the backgrounds adjust themselves to the atmosphere in the particular panel.

The character's attitudes and expressions just makes the comic even more funny and cute.

I can't really express with enough words how good this comic is and if i had to change a thing about the comic it would be the order of the panels but even that is really good.
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wizard101guy10 Featured By Owner Aug 19, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
that's amazing!~ XD
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:iconlamby-luv:
lamby-luv Featured By Owner Mar 28, 2014
They're so cute!!
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:iconnekofluffy:
NekoFluffy Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2014   Traditional Artist
Amazing^^
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:icongalaluss:
Galaluss Featured By Owner Mar 9, 2014
aaaaaahthisisgorgeous!!!
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:iconchibifox-artist:
ChibiFox-Artist Featured By Owner Mar 7, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Dawwww adorable! ^w^Bunny Emoji-42 (Awww) [V2] Heart Love 
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trickortreat05 Featured By Owner Mar 7, 2014
so cute and funny X3
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:iconbloodypink-m:
BloodyPink-M Featured By Owner Mar 6, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
XD awwwwwwwwww so cute :3
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:icontoscafroggie:
toscafroggie Featured By Owner Mar 6, 2014
asdhagdkadgskad everything is so pretty *7*
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:iconcinderpelt618:
Cinderpelt618 Featured By Owner Mar 5, 2014
Woah
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:iconotakunekosan:
OtakuNekoSan Featured By Owner Mar 5, 2014  Student Artist
Awwww!!! SO cute >w< I love it :D
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:iconfurihime:
Furihime Featured By Owner Mar 5, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanks dear :hug:
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:iconsoralover1994:
SoraLover1994 Featured By Owner Mar 4, 2014
<3 Awwwww....
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:iconfurihime:
Furihime Featured By Owner Mar 5, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
:iconheplz:
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:iconsoralover1994:
SoraLover1994 Featured By Owner Mar 6, 2014
:'D
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:iconpretty-blue-clouds24:
pretty-blue-clouds24 Featured By Owner Mar 4, 2014  Student General Artist
KAWAIIII!!!! Il est tres mignon!
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:iconfurihime:
Furihime Featured By Owner Mar 5, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanks dear :hug:
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pretty-blue-clouds24 Featured By Owner Mar 5, 2014  Student General Artist
welcome ^^
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S0uLArtOnLine Featured By Owner Mar 4, 2014  Hobbyist
Wow the detail o-o Holy hell its like out of a actual manga!? -bows before the skill-
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:iconfurihime:
Furihime Featured By Owner Mar 5, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanks, dear, but I still need more practice of doing manga XD
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:icons0ulartonline:
S0uLArtOnLine Featured By Owner Mar 5, 2014  Hobbyist
Well your pretty damn good already xD I can try and help if you need it! Like if you need a chibi sketch base for a page! O w O.
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Akatsuki07 Featured By Owner Mar 4, 2014
that is funny and cute
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:iconfurihime:
Furihime Featured By Owner Mar 5, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanks dear > w <
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:iconnekofluffy:
NekoFluffy Featured By Owner Mar 4, 2014   Traditional Artist
cute^^
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:iconfurihime:
Furihime Featured By Owner Mar 5, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you dear ^ w ^
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Megi-Usagi Featured By Owner Mar 4, 2014  Student General Artist
omg this issss soooo lovelyyyy :iconkissingplz::iconkissingplz:Broken Fighting Dome (Kawaii Please) Broken Fighting Dome (Kawaii Please) Broken Fighting Dome (Kawaii Please) Broken Fighting Dome (Kawaii Please)
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:iconfurihime:
Furihime Featured By Owner Mar 5, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank yoooouuuu :iconrubcheeksplz:
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:icontakahashiyukiko:
TakahashiYukiko Featured By Owner Mar 4, 2014  Student Digital Artist
a-are you a fujoshi?? OAO" //slapped
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:iconfurihime:
Furihime Featured By Owner Mar 5, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Unfortunately.... yes... :iconimmastupidplz:
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:icontakahashiyukiko:
TakahashiYukiko Featured By Owner Mar 6, 2014  Student Digital Artist
w-w-whaat?! OAO"
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roseycrystals730 Featured By Owner Mar 3, 2014  Student General Artist
:iconpervplz:i demand this be made into a manga.
demand
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:iconfurihime:
Furihime Featured By Owner Mar 5, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanks dear, but it ends here :iconheplz:
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:iconroseycrystals730:
roseycrystals730 Featured By Owner Mar 6, 2014  Student General Artist
:iconcryforeverplz:
:icontuzkidramaplz:
:iconmiseryplz::iconmiseryplz::iconmiseryplz::iconmiseryplz://for the rest of my life :iconmiseryplz::iconmiseryplz:
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:icontinartsu-chan:
Tinartsu-chan Featured By Owner Mar 3, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
KAWAII!!!!!! Broken Fighting Dome (Kawaii Please) 
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:iconfurihime:
Furihime Featured By Owner Mar 5, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanksssss :iconrubcheeksplz:
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:icontinartsu-chan:
Tinartsu-chan Featured By Owner Mar 5, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Ur welcome!!!! ^_^
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YUNOLIKEMELON Featured By Owner Mar 3, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I..CAN'T...HANDLE....THE..CUTENESSLlama Emoji 28 (Delicious) [V2] 
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:iconfurihime:
Furihime Featured By Owner Mar 5, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanks dear :iconleleleplz:
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YUNOLIKEMELON Featured By Owner Mar 5, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Troll 
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Inspired-Destiny Featured By Owner Mar 3, 2014  Student General Artist
So cute!!! :heart: Nice work.
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:iconfurihime:
Furihime Featured By Owner Mar 5, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanks a lot dear > w <
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