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Happy Birthday Hachiimi by Furihime Happy Birthday Hachiimi by Furihime
Happy early birthday :iconsparklesplz::iconhachiimi::iconsparklesplz:
Hope you have a wonderful birthday this year :iconsweethugplz:

This OC is just so cute, I love her very much, I hope I didn't ruin her. I also really love her pixel art I am a pixel art fans, hope someone can teach me how to pixel, since I don't understand tutorials :iconrlytearplz:

Mary (c) =Hachiimi
Art by me
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That's a great birthday present you have there! :D:D:D:D

I'm maybe the world worst criticism, but i guess i'll still give it a try. :icondeterminationplz:

Hmm..overall, it's quite good. Her dress is very detailed. I also love her eyes too. As beautiful as i can describe it. Your shading is very nice too.:iconblushplz:

You should add more detailed and be more concentrated on the background. Make those leaves more natural. If she lean against those bushes, you should draw the leaves as they are under the pressure of her weight. Also, i'm not quite understand what those apples mean... :iconwhistleplz:

Well, thats all. Hope i can draw like you but, i'm still need to practice more. Sorry for the bad English. :iconarigatouplz:
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I have never done a critique before, but I like this drawing so much that I thought I would give it a try to help this artist get even better! ^-^

First of all, I love the face! The eyes are exquisitely done, but I have to say that they may be a little big for they are into the bangs a bit too much. It may be because of style or not realizing that they were. The expression on the face is very nice and innocent and the hair is gracefully flowing in the wind. I give you an A on the hair.

My favorite part of the drawing is the ruffles. The ruffles at the neckline and on the skirt are so well done; they're perfection. The way you got them shaded is so nice too. And the lace ruffle has perfect perspective for the holes.

I love the shading on this so much. My only bad thought was the shading on the chest area. It seems a little out of place in my opinion in reflection of the rest of the shading. But otherwise you get an A+.

I have to say you could try a little better on the background, but do like the way you did the bush. Trying a little sky or even a tree would make this piece even better. That would also help explain the floating apples and the leaves; they fell from a tree, but where's the tree?

I really love this piece a lot and honestly there is not much wrong with it. This artist has great potential in her work and I'm quite willing to see more just like it!
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keikeiyuki Featured By Owner Jul 21, 2013

So cute! You arekilling me with all of your pictures! PLEASE BECOME MY MANGA ARTIST! PPPPLLLLLEEEAAASSE! YOU ARE A GOD! OR CAN AT LEAST DRAW JUST ONE OF MY CHARACTERS!

 

P.S: Sorry about all of that I just really love your work!<?xml:namespace prefix = da />:D (Big Grin) 

 

 

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keikeiyuki Featured By Owner Jul 21, 2013
Cute! LOVE IT!
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Usada-san Featured By Owner Jun 20, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
you are amazing *^*
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Cute-Heart Featured By Owner Jun 6, 2013  Student General Artist
nice :D
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amera768 Featured By Owner May 9, 2013  Hobbyist Filmographer
This is AWESOME! I love how it has to be pink or magneta brown and white. It is really cool. And check out my work! I am just a 13 year old who just began a Devian account. Tell me what you like
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Blanca-lime Featured By Owner Apr 2, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
So cute! <3
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Furihime Featured By Owner Apr 2, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanks ^^
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Metalraptor Featured By Owner Apr 1, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Gorgeous work, very beautiful. :D
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Furihime Featured By Owner Apr 2, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanks a lot :D
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Hachiimi Featured By Owner Mar 31, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
MY SWEET MARYYYYYYY SDFGHJKL HHHNGH THIS IS SO GORGEOUS--
I'VE NEVER THOUGHT OF RECEIVING B'DAY GIFT FROM YOU//MAKESMEFEELGUILTYSUDDENLY //////7////
AWWW THANK YOU SO MUCH <3333 THIS IS SO GREAT~~~ :iconmuahplz::iconmuahplz::iconmuahplz:
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