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April 15, 2012
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:iconfurihime:
1 hour doodle before night shift, today is my last night shift in pediatrics.
Hopefully I can do my pending commission after this :iconhappyblueplz:

Random character by me :D
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:iconhikizuu:
Hello, nice art you got there^^ This drawing looks amazing in the eye! I like your shading plus your art is so cute!

And now for my critique: I don't think that when you're using colored pencils you should do in a zigzag line. When using them, color them in small circular movements. And as for the skin, never use only colored pencil and harden their lead when shading. Use a varieties of colors to the skin ranging from lightest base to darkest base (I can't explain much about skin colors, but take a look at references of any different skin colors and observe the use of its colors on every layer).

Her hair looks fine. Even it has to be white (I'm not sure if its light silver but please correct me), add more shadings to its strands.

Sorry for my bad English, but I hope this helps ^^
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Mood: Love ~1Ai-Chan7 May 20, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
awe so cute, very refreshed feeling
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~ikizaku Apr 22, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
ng.... sayah ngerasa kepalanya ga imbang sama badannya. kepalanya terlalu kecil... n bahunya itu kea bahu cowok :iconimmastupidplz:

maap saya ngeritik seenaknyah orz
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*Furihime Apr 22, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Mas zaku kejam :iconruncryplz:

Iyah, gambar ini memang sangat gagal sekali :iconimseriousplz:
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~ikizaku Apr 22, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
yeeee jangan bilang gagal dong...
ini kan cuma dari sudut pandang saya aja... maap ;A;
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*Furihime Apr 22, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Nggak apa2 koq, emang pada dsarnya gagal siiiih :icontearplz:
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Are you a pediatrician? and you still have time to doodle? Amazing!!
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*Butahana-no-Usagi Apr 17, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
makin Moe :iconomgsocuteplz:
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*Furihime Apr 19, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Sekarang cuma bisa bikin moe yg gampang2 aja :icontearplz:
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=TsundereAyneDesu Apr 16, 2012  Student Interface Designer
So Cute !! I think ive seen it in a manga hehehe!!
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