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GA: The Assassin and the Youkai

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Happy belated birthday to :iconsparklesplz::iconraquach::iconsparklesplz:
Hope you have a wonderful year :iconhappyblueplz:

I'm practicing my new coloring style and color scheme, and BG also, hope you like it :iconrubcheeksplz:

You and Haku (c) *Raquach, adopted from *shrimpHEBY
Art by me
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:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Impact

The background with the roofs look pretty good and actually the Youkai (the guy with the white clothes, I hope) is very well done. Also great work is the shading and the lights from the fire.
Although the Assassin (the guy on the rooftop) doesn´t look as proportional to the roofs he is sitting on. It´s being visible by his hand which looks as if it was on a flat ground. It must me a bit more diagonal. Also his right leg looks as if it was on a flat ground, which doesn´t fit to the diagonal rooftop. He appears a bit as if he was slipping down every moment. You maybe should work on his perspective.
Although the new colouring you are using looks very cool in my eyes, it looks really like painted, which I like really much.
Aditionally you could improve the shadows of them two, e.g. paint a double shadow which shows the flickering of the fire.
My favourite detail of this picture is the assassin´s claw with it´s reflection.